The Witches
The book "The Witches" was written by Roald Dahl in 1983. It tells the story about a little boy who know that Witches exist and they kill little children.
A Grandmamma tells her grandson storys about children who met witches and about The Grand High Witch. She is the worst witch in the world. After this storys the boy met a real witch, while he plays on a tree. But she coudln't catch him. In summerholidays they went to Bournemouth into a hotel. Once the boy is in a room but then there suddenly came women into the room. And few seconds later, he realise that they are witches. The Grand High Witch is also there and she told about a new way she found out to kill children: Formula 86 Delayed Action Mouse Maker. She made enough Mouse-Maker. Suddenly the boy Bruno Jenkins comes and they give him a dosis from the Formula 86 and he became a mouse. When the meeting is over one of them suddenly smells the boy. They find him and turn him also into a mouse but he can run away and find Bruno who also escaped. They go to the Grandma and told her the whole story, because they can also speak as normal humans. They want to turn the Witches into mice with their Mouse-Makers and steal a little bottle from it out of the room from The Grand High Witch. The boy poor it into the dinnersoup for the witches and they become mice. After this Triumph, they decide to turn all the Witches from the world into mice. And so the little boy live his whole life as a mouse with his grandma.
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exp / g / str: the story of a little boy who knows ...and that they ...
exp: grandma
g: stories
g: those stories
tense: the boy meets a real witch (present tense for summaries)
tense: while he is playing on a tree
article: in the summer holidays
exp: they stay in a hotel in ...
exp: "Once the boy is in a room but then there suddenly came women into the room." ???? very vague! "A few seconds later" ??? (not really true)
3rd person s
str: she tells the other witches about ...
tense: a new method she's disovered to kill children
(Jenkins doesn't come "suddenly" - they expect him. She told him to come.)
exp/article: they give him a dose of Formula 86
exp: he turns / changes into a mouse
gr / t / : he finds Bruno, who has also excaped
exp: they can still speak like normal humans
exp: they steal a small bottle of the potion from the witch's room.
to pour (schütten)
all witches in the world
Deine Zusammenfassung ist nicht immer korrekt. Es gibt inhaltliche Sprünge. Es fehlt der Schluss.
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