Dear Adam,
Thank you for your email. How are you? I hope you're well. I'm looking forward to you and your family and also the UK.
You have some nice hobbies. I never stood on a skateboard, but I'd love to try it out. Maybe you can teach it to me.
The only sport I do is basketball, do you also play it sometimes?
I know the Kaiser Chiefs. They are also one of my favourite bands. Which songs do you like from the band? I also like Billy Talent and Linkin Park. Do you also listen to them?
I also like to go to the cinema with my friends and playing computer games.
Yes, I'll be busy at the language school during the day I think. But if we'll do some things in the evenings, it will be a nice change. I'd love to go to a castle, do you now any in your near? I like to visit old castels, they are so interesting. But if you dont be interest in this thing, we can also do what you want. Going to a party for example, that would be also very nice. If you know some things you'd like to show me, let me know.
Lovely greetings from Austria.
Yours,
Elaisa
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Your Email is well written, I think.
But it should be a informal letter and you wrote a formal letter.
I think you completed the letter with new informtions which are very good(example:Which songs do you like from the band? I also like Billy Talent and Linkin Park. Do you also listen to them?).
Mistakes, I found:
do you now any in your near? - know
I like to visit old castels - castles
But if you dont be interest in this thing - You aren't interest ..
Do you also listen to them? - listening? (I don't know).
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