Austria is a positive example of a multicultural society? Do you agree?
I think today mostly every state is a multicultural society. Austria is there no exclusion.
In Austria are more than 10% foreign persons who come from different countries from all over the world.
I also think that multiculturalism is good for every human. We can learn a lot of new things for example new languages, new religions, new culture, new food... I really like the food from China and Japan and also from Italy and France. If we only eat the food from our country, it will be boring at the time. Isn't it nice, when we have alternation?
And I also really interesting in learning new languages and get to know the different religions and cultures. That's fascinating for me.
But there also can be many problems. If in future come more and more people, there will be not enough place and jobs. And because of that, the people here get intolerant. But much people said that there are also pros, when people from different nations work at the same place. If there's for example a man from China, it will be good for the business, when he can speak with businessmen in China.
Austria is for me a multicultural society and I hope it's stay like this.
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When you answer the question, you somehow have to say whether you agree or disagree in your introduction because this is part of the topic and your introduction must introduce the topic. The question is: Is Austria a positve example? If you say 'yes', then you have to explain why you think so in the main part. The same is true of 'No'. If you partly agree, you have to say where Austria is a postive example and where not.
exp: Every state is multicultural. Austria is no exception.
exp: boring after a while
Abwechslung - variety / varied food
exp / str: And for me it's really intersting to learn ...
wo: if in future more and more people come, ...
exp: there won't be enough space ...
much / many!!
t: Many people say ... (a fact!)
wo:
For me, Austria is ...
t: I hope it'll stay like this.
Your introduction is not correct.
And in the second paragraph, you start with the idea 'problems' and in the middle of the paragraph you suddenly introduce a contradicting idea. That's not correct.
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