Sonntag, 24. Januar 2010

Letter

Dear Kris

Thank you for your letter. I was really happy to hear from you.
You told me that you have problems with your stepmother. I hope everything is a bit better and she don't still nasty you.

Anyway last time I've much to learn for school and because of that I have problems. We had so many tests the last weeks and on weekends I also had so much homework to do. But when I have a important test and have to learn alot, I can't do all the homeworks punctual.
Well, next week we'll have only one physic test and I'll have to speak 3 minutes with my english teacher. I hope it will be good, I'm very nervous, because when I had to speak fast, I've not enough time to think about the right vocabulary and then I get a bad mark... Please wish me luck.

Oh, and another thing I want to tell you. Last weekend I slept by a good friend. It was really funny, we watched some Films, told us funny things and laugh alot. We also cooked pizza and pudding. Yummy!

One last thing, what do you do on your holidays? I wanted to propose you to visit me, because my parents and my sister and brother want to visit my grandmother for a few days. I want to see you again!

All my love.
Yours Elaisa
xoxo

1 Kommentar:

Guenter hat gesagt…

3rd person 's'/present simple
WO/exp: she isn't nasty to you still
p: Anyway, ... (comma!)
exp: in letzer Zeit = lately (+ present perfect)
exp: pünktlich = on time
str. We had so much homework to do that I ...
g: an important ... /a tiny ...
sp: a lot
exp: Physics test - die Physik = physics
sp: English
exp: I hope I'll do well ...
t, g: when I have to speak fast, I don't have enough time to ...
exp: I stayed over night at a good friend's ...
sp. films
exp: told each other funny stories / jokes / ...
t: ... and laughed a lot
You bake a pizza rater than cook it.
Be careful: 'pudding' is not necessarily what you think it is.
exp: in your holidays
exp: 'propose' (very formal, not suitable for this letter) -> Why don't you come to visit me?

For a text as short as this there are quite a few mistakes. It's would be a good idea to learn the vocabulary that you got wrong here so you remember it next time.